What makes revision successful? A willingness to let go of your original ideas. I'm not saying that everything in your first draft is wrong. In fact, most of your ideas probably work. That's why it's so important to find the outliers, the things you've outgrown, or shifted away from, or let's be real, mentioned once and completely forgot. Cutting the parts that aren't working is the best way to amplify the ideas that are serving your story. The things your future readers will fall in love...